The front page was something I was very unhappy with for my first draft. I felt that it wasn't a good reflection of the work put in, including research and actual creation, and so I spent some more time making feedback appropriate changes. Some of the feedback I got led to the font of the menu changing, and the added of the colour strip at the bottom and also the strap line.
I have made some subtle changes to my front cover and contents page. Changing font and adding content were the main focuses. I had wanted to change some of my photos, adding different models into the smaller photos however I didn't have the chance. This is one thing I would definitely change/ improve on.
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